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In his eyes



Author: MagicMJ
Created: March 27, 2010 at 12:30 am
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Love | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4.5 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments 196 views

In his eyes 
Looking in his eyes
Bliss and sorrow entwined
For in him I will taste
The bitterness and spice

For alone I shall face
The hardships he may bring
But in my soul, I will find
My heaven through his eyes

In his face reflected
The man who told me lies
But what I can deny
Is the beauty in his smiles

The love that once scarred
This delicate heart of mine
Will be forever found
In my sweet little baby’s eyes

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Last Modified: November 03, 2010 at 08:21 am


Author Notes
Dedicated to all women and the beauty of motherhood....
Even if they have to face it all by themselves...


 

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Comments & Reviews

Taliesin
March 27, 2010

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Very good
You can tell you poured your heart into this. I think you meant can't deny ... I really enjoyed reading this. I hope there are not many mothers that have to be on their own.

MagicMJ
March 27, 2010
(Creator)
Hi there...

thanks a lot for the review...
yeahhh... sorry for the typo error...

many thanks again....

Taliesin
April 07, 2010
It was such a lovely piece so of course I commented



Whiskurz
March 27, 2010

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Beautiful!!!
This is a beautifully written piece and it is so very descriptive......I especially liked the line you wrote about that you will find your heaven through his eyes......Children are a lot of work, it's true, but the rewards that they bring are beyond measure......The giggles alone, are just priceless......Whiskurz

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