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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥

Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: July 08, 2005 at 04:04 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Friendship | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments and 427 views

In the Oceans  

In the ocean

Itís very hard to say goodbye
To one you hold so dear~
But I know just how good you'll look
When I face my fear!

You move me in so many ways~
As a loving friendship should!
And I'd have you stay here always.
Kid, if I only could.

Youíve been very good to me~
And Iím gonna miss you so!
I say these things flat out right~
Just in case you didnít know.

And if you even entertain the thought,
Of forgetting about me!???!
Iíll haunt you anyways,
In the oceans of your dreams~

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July 13, 2005
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beautiful just beautiful...thanks for sharing

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July 12, 2005
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In a mind of many hauntings a ghost as sweet as thee is welcomed to do as she may.

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July 08, 2005
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AMAZING!!! this poem was so, so good, Ivie your the best!

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