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Author: MagicMJ
Created: March 25, 2010 at 11:07 am
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Love | Relationships | General/Other
Entry Stats: 5 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments 163 views

From a far I saw her
With just a look
I feel her
Electricity flowed
Ecstasy I canít control
For so many years
Iíve been wanting
To touch her
Her hands cling to mine
Taste her sweet lips
Be her paradise
And now the time has come
For us to take a vow
Together we will be one
With this bond
Iíll be forever his man
And her my loving wife Registered & Protected

Last Modified: November 03, 2010 at 08:14 am

Author Notes
I just thought to write something that i feel the men were feeling on their wedding day... hope I expressed it right....)


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March 25, 2010

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Writing from the perspective of the opposite sex is sometimes difficult but I feel you've done a great job. This is very romantic and I feel a lot of people can relate. Great poem.

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March 25, 2010

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great work dude
gives a very intence feeling............really nice touches my heart

March 25, 2010
many thanks pal...


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