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Author: MagicMJ

Created: March 25, 2010 at 11:07 am

Entry Type: Poem, G (All)

Category: Love | Relationships | General/Other

Entry Stats: 5 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments 137 views

Union

From a far I saw her
With just a look
I feel her
Electricity flowed
Ecstasy I can’t control
For so many years
I’ve been wanting
To touch her
Her hands cling to mine
Taste her sweet lips
Be her paradise
And now the time has come
For us to take a vow
Together we will be one
With this bond
I’ll be forever his man
And her my loving wife

Last Modified: November 03, 2010 at 08:14 am

Author Notes

I just thought to write something that i feel the men were feeling on their wedding day... hope I expressed it right....)

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Comments & Reviews

OfiraS
March 25, 2010

Helpful:

Writing from the perspective of the opposite sex is sometimes difficult but I feel you've done a great job. This is very romantic and I feel a lot of people can relate. Great poem.

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scoofey
March 25, 2010

Helpful:

great work dude

gives a very intence feeling............really nice touches my heart

Additional Comments (1)

MagicMJ
March 25, 2010
(Creator)

many thanks pal...

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