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A Poem by ThunderStorm

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: March 20, 2010 at 12:51 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Fantasy | Fantasy | Fantasy
Upload Stats: 3 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments and 241 views

Walking ThunderBomb  

I am Thunderstorm.

I am like a walking Thunderbomb.

Fill with many Great Ideas.

My Friends like my Ideas.

I Respect Ioana Gabstboz Kurt jaded timmie Action Starr kailka works.

Even I Started A alliance of Love Respect and poetry.

Long live the Creatures of the poetry World.

© ThunderStorm - all rights reserved

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April 06, 2010
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Your concept is sound, and your imagery is a good choice. The line structure and grammer could use some work, but where there is potential for growth, there is always a poet to be born into this realm of art... a phoenix waiting to rise from the ash of effort and accept its place among the fiery realm of life

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