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Dream

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Author: MagicMJ

Created: March 18, 2010 at 09:17 am

Entry Type: Poem, G (All)

Category: General/Other | Romance | Fantasy

Entry Stats: 4.5 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments 137 views

Dream

Candle lights
Burning hearts
These I feel
For you tonight

Whisper words
Through my mind
Hypnotize me
With your eyes

You’re a maze
You left me in haze
Uncover you
Is what I long to do

Fancy you
Is all I can do
With my arms
Let me embrace you

But as the clock ticks
I felt frantic
In my heart I got a kick
'Cause the night will suddenly slip
With no you and just a dream

Last Modified: November 03, 2010 at 07:47 am

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jlmrocks
January 01, 2011

Helpful:

great

i love it.its worded great

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scousa1
March 26, 2010

Helpful:

but its good to dream yes? thats why we write....i enjoyed the read very much thanks .....joe.

Additional Comments (1)

MagicMJ
March 26, 2010
(Creator)

Thanks a lot!!!!!!

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