I think that you are using the names as a reflection of a planet or star in the Galaxy. But I think it lacks a bit of describtion as to why Kimmy J is like a star inside of her own eye and Loana's gift is so spirited and so forth.
Like: Kimmy J is like a star inside of her own eye full of light, energic and shining upon us to light the way. You know why is she like a star?
If these people read the poem, they would want to know why you call them a star.
I couldn't agree more! Kassandra's eyes are a gift from the Gods and I would know! After all we are in love Just kidding but such a sweet gesture and I appreciate you adding me and everyone else! You are an amazing person. You are very genuine and are going to be a Star!!! Keep up the good work! Thank you for the poem!