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A Poem by ThunderStorm


Author: ThunderStorm
Created: March 16, 2010 at 09:19 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Fantasy | Fantasy | Fantasy
Upload Stats: 1 comments and 148 views

A tribute to Action Starr

A=Aces
C=Canes
T=Trains
I=Ice
O=Orange
N=Nocto

S=Sugar
T=Tram
A=Awesome
R=Red
R=Reason

Action starr is a Gangsta Rapper by delight he is so openminded he is thoughtful. for his Homies on the spotlight he has the Charisma that it is so Cool. and Awesome he is so polite what ever you do guys don't make him Pissed off. this Homie G and thug mix he is Cool in my book.


Last Modified: August 14, 2010 at 04:39 pm
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justoutthere
March 16, 2010
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I'm really sorry! I absolutely hated it! Look I don't wanna be mean but were supposed to be critical to help each other... what is IT? It made no sense, it was written as if you were absolutely stoned off your trolly and I just couldn't bare to look at it again. I mean I've read other stuff by you and its not bad... but god boy this is horrendous! Try add more structure next time maybe? Sorry again!


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