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Author: vintucci
Created: March 14, 2010 at 03:38 pm
Entry Type: Poem, T (13+)
Category: Romance | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4 Stars by 2 users with 3 comments 292 views

Bliss 
Lying here next to you as I caress your body
having to hold you and feel you makes me feel warm inside
Vince: to kiss your sweet soft lips as I world down to your neck
holding a rose up to your nose as you feel my pecks
feeling your body as an artiste’s on their canvas
I feel the emotions with you as uncontrollable bliss
kissing every inch of your soul
having you to cherish and to hold
our bodies begin to sweat
thinking about the time we first met
mystical beauty you are
as I lay by pulsating body on top of yours
feeling every inch of me
knowing I am the man you want me to be
I write this for the world to see
As I want everyone to know that I want you to be with me



Last Modified: March 14, 2010 at 04:01 pm

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Comments & Reviews ( X 1)

MaryJane
March 14, 2010

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Oh yea I loved this one very descriptive and intoxicating words! Love the sincerity and the erotic feel to this one! Great job keep it up!

vintucci
March 22, 2010
(Creator)
This is how i feel and it comes out in my writing



MissShyAngel
March 14, 2010

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lot of emotion and imagery in this keep writing

vintucci
March 22, 2010
(Creator)
Thank you you should check out my latest writing



writeforme
March 14, 2010

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You certainly have a way with words! And I can really feel your passion through the actions that are told. Just one other comment...You might want to consider changing the rating on the poem from G to maybe T. Just a suggestion. Keep writing!

vintucci
March 22, 2010
(Creator)
Thank you.. already did.. thanx for your feedback



      

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