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A Poem by ThunderStorm

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: March 14, 2010 at 12:13 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Fantasy | Love | Friendship
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 2 users with 3 comments and 268 views

Wolf Heaven  

Wolf Heaven.

Look at you as cute wolf cub. you are sweet politeness.

you are pure as snow. I give you a bubble bath dry your fur off.

day by day I look at you. go out hunting bring something back.

Grown to be a full adult wolf. I Love my kind gentle wolf.

Found the right girl wolf. have 4 beautiful wolf pups.

Train them like pack hunters. Hunt their own Food.

Teach them Well. Let the Female Wolf eat First.

Then it is Male's turn to eat.

To Gabs and Dark. You Are my Wolf Brothers.

© ThunderStorm - all rights reserved

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October 17, 2013
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I do love Wolves!
Though some might find it dark, but oh... I see tenderness and sincere love...

Wolves are loyal, like the brothers wolves here, may you always be together sharing everything in life, finding ways to bring the light into the "wolfy" heaven...

magical Blessings to the brothers wolves...

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March 14, 2010
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awesome! I love it brother wolf! you penned this one down to my alley...keeps on!


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March 14, 2010
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This is really good! The best part about it, is, in my opinion, the unsureness about it. Is it really about a wolf? Or are you comparing someone you love to a wolf. The best writers get a reader thinkng, and this poem sure got me thinking. I hope you continue writing so everyone can enjoy it. Keep up the good work!

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