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Author: MagicMJ

Created: March 14, 2010 at 07:56 am

Entry Type: Poem, G (All)

Category: General/Other | Personal | Inspirational

Entry Stats: 4 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments 139 views

Songs

Words like winds caressing my senses
Blowing through my ears like whispers from angels
Creative minds channelling through ink and papers
Crossing time, boundaries, worlds and spaces

A single stroke of pen that can change one soul forever
Arouses one’s feelings like a gentle fever
Bringing one’s mind to another place,
elevation, ecstasy and radiance

Born through union of words and rhythms
Bounded by grace of its creator
Unfolded emotions of fears and passion
Now heard and felt, senses reborn, uplifted

This magical power I pray
Bestow to me and set me free
Unleash my spirit, let it flee
Into world of words and harmony

Last Modified: November 03, 2010 at 07:29 am

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Comments & Reviews

Yosomono
March 14, 2010

Helpful:

Heya

I love the feeling that I get from this poem. The way that you made it fit together was very effective. If I were to give you any advice for it, the only thing that I can think of is that you might want to count your syllables and make them match. I occasionally felt like some lines were too long compared to the shorter ones (or vice versa) that should be the same.

Additional Comments (1)

MagicMJ
March 18, 2010
(Creator)

hi!!! thanks a lot for the advice... glad you liked it...

many thanks!!

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