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A Poem by ThunderStorm


Author: ThunderStorm
Created: March 13, 2010 at 12:30 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Romance | Romance | Romance
Upload Stats: 4.75 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 762 views

Surfing under the Sunset  

Hello my love.

A shore kissed by a wave.surfing on the biggest wave. making your Fans Cheer.

Screaming your name Girls Faint on the sand. awaiting for you to sign their autographs.

From the millions of surfers and surfers alike.awaiting to teach them your tricks.

Waiting in the hot steaming sun.getting a tan underneath it.feel you like are a Trophy.

For the Annual Surfing Tourment. 100 surfers are here. From All around the world.

To Become The Greatest Surfing King.Dancing Under the milky way.

To Float in the Sunset. And bending down on 1 knee asking the girl to married you.


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Comments & Reviews



GABSTBOZ
July 31, 2010
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Hi Thunder
hahaha surfing and marriage, it couldn't be any better than that. Love the title "Surfing Under the Sunset".
The first line is beautiful as it sets up the ending, " A shore kissed by the wave"- "To float in the sunset and bending down on one knee, asking the girl to marry you" very nice feel.

Smiles
gabs


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tarantulla81
March 13, 2010
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that is a wonderful work thunder. you improved a whole lot here.
its easy to read and very understandable emotionally
its creative as well.
keep up the improvements going



(Author)
I owed you so much i will review every poem for you I love you as a loyal friend

 ThunderStorm replied on March 13, 2010




      

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