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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥


Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: June 21, 2005 at 02:50 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Personal | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 3.75 Stars by 4 users with 4 comments and 443 views

Just Once More...  

Just Once More

Iíve got to have it out with you
Youíve just not been playing fair
I feel if I let you know youíll understand
Or are you this way because you just donít care?

Ravenous and at times, yes, the Villain
Iím not the one, not here not now not today
The scene as others and me see it
Is that youíre the king with the beastly way

I know my words and phrases are harsh
But I guess Iím the naÔve to let you know
You used to be a pretty stand up fella
But your behavior as of late has got to go.

Let me explain the reason for this harping
And itís because you deserve a lashiní
Two faced, Punked ass, and knowing it all
All the time is just never in fashion.

We been going along with your B.S.
Hoping it was just a passing phase,
But what started out one day as a hairball
Is whoever you are in an instant pissy haze!

Do you mean to repel those who must endure you?
With snotty comebacks that are mostly lies?
The sh#tís so deep around here now days
We gotta wear hip boots up to our eyes!

Can you put down that bloody hatchet?
And remove that log from your shoulder?
Because if you come at me this way again
The spanking youíll get will be even bolder.

Whatís more is Iíll do it in front of the others as well
And all will understand why Iím seeing red
For Iíll take you down quite a few notches
While I pi$$ down your throat after ripping off your head!!



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Comments & Reviews


August 10, 2008
Well, that is one way of getting your anger out! LOL I especially liked the last lines! Cletus ( Clete ) Hardiman Keep on writing!


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Katela
June 21, 2005
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I've known guys like that, great write!


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Katela
June 21, 2005
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This poem made me chuckle, good write


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MaryJane
June 21, 2005
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oooo damn (Lol) sounds like a serious case.


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