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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥


Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: June 21, 2005 at 02:03 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Suspense | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.33 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments and 445 views

~~Fire~~  

~Fire~

Fires are starting
Everywhere you go
You just never know when
One will show

Some need a good soaking
Other should be fanned
Though all of them have this in common:
They ALL need to be manned!

Putting them out isnít easy
Because of all the glare
You need to be on watch
So that you donít catch fire there

Thereís just as much danger if not more
In fanning them because itís curious
To keep it contained in proportion
Can be a duty thatís fast and furious

So donít be startled when you see me work
Iíve been doing this for quite some time
Itís a job I love and am used to
And this is just one of my stories in short rhyme.


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Comments & Reviews



Katela
June 21, 2005
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You're an excellent writer, this poem flowed perfectly VERY good write


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MaryJane
June 21, 2005
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This is cute. I like it. Good job.


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Black_Dragon
June 21, 2005
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very good


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