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The poetry brothers
Brother's of poetry, with words from the soul To look up in the sky where all the heros go Brothers of poetry, writing up a storm
no cloud should ruin these brothers they respect each other In thunder, rain or the sunny blue sky Brothers poem's will make you cry read them one for all and all for one And feel their words like the warmth of the sunthe phoenix angel is choosing to lead these 2 brothers In flight they take and rise with the ambers they take care of their poetic mom Mother earth sings her spiritual song she comforts us she guides us we are her babies we love her to deaththe both of us hate pain misery and suffering we love each other and we will scarifice each other stamina's to ioana and jaded and timmie we love you Love the brothers of poetry Thunder and gabstboz
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very good start. it had some sweet and gentle elements that true friendship has.
might be an idea may be to add some period marks in the second half and middle of the piece. it helps the reader really understand what you want to say.