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A Poem by ThunderStorm

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: March 03, 2010 at 05:50 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Romance | Romance | Romance
Upload Stats: 1 comments and 226 views

Metal phoenix

the metal phoenix is inside a metal egg once the hot lava breaks

the metal egg shell the birth of a new phoenix this metal phoenix

has a name it is called the jaded rose... she is getting ready for a

whole new challenges for this metal phoenix I am willing to see

what kind of new poetry of miss metal phoenix jaded rose has to

come up with she is getting ready for the pen of flames... I love

you Jaded Rose as a loyal and trusted friend...

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March 03, 2010
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I like the story behind this poem, in fact I believe that this concept would have made for a better short story than a poem. Overall it has great potential it definitely holds the readers attention. Also Jaded Rose is a fabulous name for a phoenix.

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