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A Poem by ThunderStorm


Author: ThunderStorm
Created: February 26, 2010 at 06:15 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Romance | Fantasy | Sad
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 1 users with 2 comments and 179 views

Destiny  

the pain is suffering is inside this poet's heart my best friend and a brother to me

dark elegy is now going solo.... now looks like my dream is coming crashing

down on me i can't not conquer it without my best friend and a brother to me

the pain is a sacrfice to me. the pain is inside of my heart it is too painful and

broken inside i made a promise to my Grandpa and my fellow writers if i write

450 poems i will published it and i will call it My Destiny of the storm... To

ioana jaded rose gabstboz timmie and to my grandpa and katrina i will not stop

till my destiny is been reached this poet is coming in at full force I love you...

guys so much... I love you all Thunderstorm


© ThunderStorm - all rights reserved


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Cat1991x
February 26, 2010
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This is so heartwarming thunderstorm.
I really feel every word you say.
I no with such great and fantastic words and writing you do you will reach 450 poems and go beyond. keep your head held high,keep smiling and you will always get their in the end.


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ElllieB15
February 26, 2010
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The formant
im confused on where the actually poem was and where the credits or what evers were.
Mabye better format would help.


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