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A Poem by XcherriesX


Author: XcherriesX
Created: February 22, 2010 at 05:24 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Heartbreak | Love | Despair
Upload Stats: 4.75 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 290 views

Butterflies  

My heart pumps faster, as he comes near,
Him not liking me is my greatest fear.
Little winged insects fluttering around,
Their wings sliding together, such a beautiful sound.
His eyes twinkling a golden brown,
If I were queen, I'd give him a crown.
When he talks, I stutter.
When he asks a question, I mutter.
I would trust him with my heart,
That is if it hadn't fallen apart.
Fallen apart, when I saw him kissing a girl,
When I saw that it was an end to my world.


Last Modified: October 06, 2010 at 06:05 pm
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MaryJane
February 22, 2010
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I can def. relate to this piece as I believe many thers can as well. It really hurts to like someoe and have them not feel the same way as you do. I like the straightforwardness of this piece and I really like that youve kept it short. A vey good rythm and a rhyme to it! Great job!


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BeautifulHotGirl
February 22, 2010
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GOoD
Ooh this is so Beautiful.


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