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Author: XcherriesX
Created: February 22, 2010 at 05:24 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Heartbreak | Love | Despair
Entry Stats: 4.75 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments 272 views

My heart pumps faster, as he comes near,
Him not liking me is my greatest fear.
Little winged insects fluttering around,
Their wings sliding together, such a beautiful sound.
His eyes twinkling a golden brown,
If I were queen, I'd give him a crown.
When he talks, I stutter.
When he asks a question, I mutter.
I would trust him with my heart,
That is if it hadn't fallen apart.
Fallen apart, when I saw him kissing a girl,
When I saw that it was an end to my world.

Last Modified: October 06, 2010 at 06:05 pm

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February 22, 2010

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I can def. relate to this piece as I believe many thers can as well. It really hurts to like someoe and have them not feel the same way as you do. I like the straightforwardness of this piece and I really like that youve kept it short. A vey good rythm and a rhyme to it! Great job!

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February 22, 2010

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Ooh this is so Beautiful.

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