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A Poem by ThunderStorm

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: February 21, 2010 at 05:34 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Romance | Love | Lyrics
Upload Stats: 3.75 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 231 views

The phoenix writers  

The crossroads is fuitle the raging storm is brewing in Jaded is inside

the raging storm while ioana scarficed her own body to save her best

friend life in the raging storm she asked will someone saved us then a

mighty warrior come from the storm clouds i am the thunderstorm i will

save you ladies so one slash from his thunderblade the girls give their

new savior thunderstorm a kiss on the cheek the comet rush down on the

2 girls timmie came along with gabstboz and dark their took them to

their clouds of phoenix writers forever we are the best of the best we

do we all love to write poetry we will not stopped till we have every

last breath in our bodies we will scarfice our charisma but we will be

damned someone try stop us... so in love the love i put into my best

friends love and teaching and courage and hope and love.... and the

respected been love... I love you ioana katrina timmie dark elegy Jaded

rose Steve boszo i will scarfice my charisma....

© ThunderStorm - all rights reserved

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Comments & Reviews

February 27, 2010
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it is ok
you need to add more description to the poem as it is a romance

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February 21, 2010
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cool thunder. nice story

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