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The Thunders of enteral life

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: February 17, 2010 at 06:43 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Romance | Romance | Romance
Entry Stats: 4.75 Stars by 2 users with 4 comments 124 views
The Thunders of enteral life 
As the Courageous soul inside of this poet's body from the smoking ashes and the clouds

of darkness it consumes my entire lifeless body but then i feel normal the thunders of

Enteral life healed my Battle scars and my wounds I have a thunderstorm soul inside of

me I am thunderstorm I am thunderstorm I am thunderstorm the Handsomest

The Radicalest the nicest I love my loyal and true fellow writers I am not Afraid to back

up my brothers in arms and sisters In the poetry world The Thunders of enteral life it

Soothes the aching body

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Comments & Reviews ( X 2)

GABSTBOZ
February 19, 2010

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The name is ThunderStorm. The storm bringer of 450 poems to be times by two.
The keeper from harm, writing everyday something new.
Keep them coming.

Smiles
Gab
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darkelegy
February 17, 2010

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Yeah! such a powerful lines brother Wolf I can really feel the emotions here...its a good write brother and you penned it! keeps on and thnak you for sharing...

darkelegy...
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DansOnly
February 17, 2010

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Nice Thoughts
Nice use of words. I believe many have this perspective of life. Life can seem like a constant uphill battle, but the wounds heal, and if you can help a friend along the way, all the better. Good write. Would have liked to see some periods, but in the end, I don't think it really needs them.

Just my thoughts
Dans
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gareth
February 17, 2010

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enjoyable
this is a very intreging write, i like it and the way you seem to allow poetry to take control and be an outlet to many emotions. very short but i feel would not serve be the shame should it be any longer.
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