Self judgement( through my boyfriends eyes)


Author: indiechick
Created: February 12, 2010 at 11:04 am
Entry Type: Poem, M (16+)
Category: Love | Erotica | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4.83 Stars by 3 users with 5 comments 240 views
Self judgement( through my boyfriends eyes) 
this is what my boyfriend says
i love the cherry hair on your head
it smells so good soft to touch
your big grin, i love
when your clothes come off
my jaw drops
your hips are round your waist small
your smooth pale skin
makes me want to crawl
your tits in my hands set me on fire
the devil inside you
that says your ugly
is a wicked liar
your eyes are big and brown
looking in them i fall and drown
your so light and happy
i never see you frown
your voice is this gritty gravel
dripping with honey
your so pretty, smart, and funny
you kiss me hard you kiss me long
you are fragile and strong
i know you better than you think i so
and all i see
is happiness and beauty
in you


Author Notes
This i wrote from words my boyfriend says how he loves me the way his body moves all to convey his thoughts of me.


 

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Comments & Reviews ( X 6)

rocker15
January 12, 2011

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aww
this is so amazing, i wished someone felt this way about me. if these are his exact words, he seems like an amazing guy. your very lucky
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Darkhawk
October 06, 2010

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this is really good - provides a pretty unique perspective of you - it was a pretty great read - thanks for posting this
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icedcreations
March 10, 2010

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Wow. He obviously thinks you are something special.
Make the most of these word, store them in your heart and remember them for ever.
I only wish my body could look something like yours, unfortunately only a blind man would think it does haha.
Christine
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melissa
February 15, 2010

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Woowww what an absolutely sweet write! It's a piece that is filled with love, passion and sincerity it is so complimenting. I am envious of the admiration that this person seems to have for you!
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user8687
February 14, 2010

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Wow
Wow, you;r o lucky to have a boyfriend that loves you so much.
I envy you.

Peace,
Ava
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indiechick
February 15, 2010
(Creator) 		thank you babe someone is going to feel this way for u i promise.

user8687
February 15, 2010 		I wish




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