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♥ Keeping My Place ♥


Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: June 02, 2005 at 02:08 am
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Personal | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 5 Stars by 4 users with 4 comments 445 views

Keeping My Place 
Keeping My Place

Little girl lost
Inside these pages
Iím tossed
From one lyric to the next
Little girl found
Inside these pages
And all around
Rhyming in lyrical text

Once she thought she was nothing,
And everyone she thought felt the same.
But these lost and found somethings
Brought her back round to being sane.

These are the things that mean the most,
Things that tie it all together.
Itís a matter of being awake.
Itís also a prison that lasts forever.

How can I make anyone understand,
The meaning that some words hold for me?
They are the wind on which the flames are fanned,
They donít slide by me casually.

So scorched I am by all that heat.
It rises up to shine on my face.
Waves coming up off the road under my feet,
And these words they give me place,
Keep the pace,
Run the race,
Round every base.

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Comments & Reviews

Katela
June 21, 2005

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You have so many new poem, they're all so good! I hope I read most of them, excellent writing Ivie

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Katela
June 08, 2005

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I have no words to describe this poem, it was BEAUTIFULLY written..........

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GarrettE
June 02, 2005

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I am in awe, this poem was amazing, excellent job, its...beyond words

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TempestOfNature
June 02, 2005

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i keep my place sometimes but just learning hoe to keep it there for a while is hard...thnaks for sharing Ivie excellent job....

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