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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥


Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: June 02, 2005 at 02:06 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Weird | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.66 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments and 495 views

~Why is the Sun Crying?  

Why is the Sun Crying?

Why is the sun crying?
Or is it just withering
While it is dying?
The moon is all of the way
Over there now.
Looks alright, seems o.k..
Venus Mercury Mars
And Jupiter with its eye,
Amongst all those stars.
Saturn Neptune Uranus
Captivate us trough telescopes.
Inquire within and inspire us.
Pluto and Ceres,
Are last in line for now
Sometimes I wonder just how
And what will happen next.
North south east and west.
When will it be
The end of it all?
Crashing, smashing to earth,
Would it fall?
Or would we be the first to go?
Just the beginning of the fireworks show.
If anyone had or has a clue,
Just get back to me and let me know.


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Comments & Reviews



Katela
June 08, 2005
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Another beautiful one, I think I've read it before, but its so pretty Keep up the good work


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GarrettE
June 02, 2005
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Thank you for commenting on my work, I really apreciate it, This poem is excellent, an enchanting view of our heavens


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smurfintheweb
June 02, 2005
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pretty good. keep up the good work


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