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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥

Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: June 02, 2005 at 01:06 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Romance | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 418 views

~Lovely Business~  

~Lovely Business~

If thereís a place for you and me~
Then there is time for us to be.
I write songs about our love,
It comes from within and down from above.

Can it be true these things between?
Seemingly far and few as has been seen.
Come to me now and show me something,
Something I can believe is a brass ring.


See me, see me looking at you
I love the way you look back at me too.
Itís lovely business between you and I,
Forever under the same sun moon stars and sky.

I live to reach for brass rings
Certainly love, infatuation and similar things.
You are defiantly a brass ring to me.
Am I insane , or can you as well see?

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June 02, 2005
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Very good poem/song. amazing talent

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June 02, 2005
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cute song Ivie that something I would sing to my man....*tehe*..thanks for sharing

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