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A Poem by ThunderStorm


Author: ThunderStorm
Created: January 16, 2010 at 01:42 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Romance | Romance | Romance
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 4 users with 5 comments and 178 views

Glitter rose  

Your heart is your love, your love is your family your family is your

future, your future is your destiny your destiny is your Ambiton,

Your love is your true destiny, and your family is number on your

list and take care of your pets second and when is starting to

winter make sure you bring your plants in You do not want your

plants to die on you then make sure you put logs in your

fireplace then write a Excllent poem while you sipping a cup of

hot tea to sooth your aching back and your aching muscles then

after your write a Poem Make sure you put your baby in bed

tomorrow is a brand new day


© ThunderStorm - all rights reserved

Author Notes


Glitters


 
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Comments & Reviews ( X 1)



Kaybug
January 20, 2010
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wow, this was interesting. Good job and word formation.


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andycapped
January 16, 2010
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about time you wrote a real poem,jeeeezzzzzz' o' petes!!!!!!!! not bad of a poem. good job !!! a*c*


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tarantulla81
January 16, 2010
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beautiful thunder,
very gentle and elegant.


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JonLondon
January 16, 2010
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My brother, your rhymes are of loving times..dancing along your heart written lines

Loved this piece...well structured and flows like a dream


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dgal
January 16, 2010
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i enjoyed the rhythm of this write. you are very talented . . . keep up the good work!


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