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Author: spirit99

Created: January 12, 2010 at 10:12 pm

Entry Type: Poem, G (All)

Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other

Entry Stats: 4.4 Stars by 5 users with 6 comments 224 views

Feelings

The pain does not hurt anymore
Because I can not feel

Author Notes

I wrote this on 1-08-09 just something I was feeling at the time

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gothpoet_2012
December 09, 2010

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hmmmmmm...interesting..short, and way to write out your feelings even if its just a quick jott down! At first I thought you needed more then I loved the idea, as soon as I read the authors note I understood your piece more. So definitly a brilliant idea with your much needed authors note. Never stop writing.

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steven743
June 14, 2010

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cuold of try d moure pl;

cuold of try d moure pl;

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sweetforest
March 15, 2010

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I know this numbness. Short, direct, and openly honest, this is a sad but good piece.

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melissa
March 09, 2010

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Hhmm to not be a ble to experience all those "negative" feelings would be a great thing indeed I often wish I would no longer feel some emotions mysellf. Good job!

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Chowa
January 18, 2010

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Sad write

Sad but short piece, sometimes when we are down, we seem to be bullet proof at times, this i think is one of those times, enjoyable read >> Chowa....

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HPGreg
January 18, 2010

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Real

This is very real in many ways and it is painful. For when a person gets like this, their life has become numb and more and more pain will fall. One can only pray that a person that is going through a time like this in their life will look up, for Heaven can and will send the cure for the heart.
Thanks for sharing this strong message in these few lines.
HPGreg

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