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♥ ~Far From Fantasy~ ♥


Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: May 29, 2005 at 03:31 am
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Dark | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4.59 Stars by 5 users with 5 comments 499 views

~Far From Fantasy~ 
~Far From Fantasy~


The persnickety magician
Languished for many years
Close to the bottom of a swamp
With gators and snakes drying his tears.
While straight into your back yard
The pretty pedophilic priest
Escaped with a rape
In the night like a thief.
Now the toothy Jack-o-lantern
Fainted with pure fright
While on top of the beginning of the world
From these trampled and torrid sights.
So the quiet mad scientist
Tiptoed as they lumbered
Into the corner of the darkest room
The one where Darwin slumbers
Now tigers are few but everywhere
And may still lithe fully leap
Into your uptight locker
Where sweaty socks and skeletons sleep
Where is the lonesome reporter
When you absolutely need one?
He’s in front of the pit of a volcano
With his fishing pole having fun
Far far far from fantasy’s life
The cackling castle keeper of mirth
Stares out from behind his toothless grin
Waiting for the end of this earth




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Comments & Reviews

Katela
May 31, 2005

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whoa! back with a vengence eh? This poem was delightfully written, all twisted and confusing, but great none the less!

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TempestOfNature
May 31, 2005

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this is definelty from from fantasy..its a dream in some ways thanks for sharing..

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drowning_in_you
May 29, 2005

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Verry nice Ivie and quite original as well

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MaryJane
May 29, 2005

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Oh wow, this is excellent!

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BobQuinn
May 29, 2005

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Sounds like a good Christian commentary on events right out of the headlines! I'm glad you are keeping an eye on what's going on, Oh yeah...welcome back.

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