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A tribute to the preistess daughter hayile

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: December 27, 2009 at 11:56 am
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Romance | Love | Tribute
Entry Stats: 4.9 Stars by 5 users with 7 comments 187 views
A tribute to the preistess daughter hayile 
H=Happy
A=aces
Y=yellow
I =igloo
L=leap
E=Eternal

On god’s mighty green earth in Westminster California there is a future writer here at writers-network her name is hayile she loves her mom so much she does excellent poems just like her mom does HAYILE wants to become a brilliant writer just like her brilliant mom she adores her mom so much following her mom’s legacy is 1 step at a time she is 12 years old she is so beautiful and talented just like her mom she writes like a cute mermaid her mom is a goddess of the sea calling on the dolphins and the mighty whales her daughter loves dolphins too good luck young HAYLIE may god take care of you and your mom safe and sound



Last Modified: January 16, 2010 at 02:30 pm

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Comments & Reviews ( X 8)

Dom1n1ck
January 04, 2010

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Cool
That was a really cool piece Thunder. Nice work on it. D
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Amandamic21
December 28, 2009

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This is so sweet. I love mermaids and dolphins, gentle creatures, free spirited and intelligent. Great tribute you penned.
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darkelegy
December 27, 2009

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Sweet wolf! yeah one for cute Haylie...cute piece, for a cute angel...keeps up Wolf and thank you for making this...

dakelegy...
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tmusabyimana
December 27, 2009

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That is quite cute.
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ShaunaA91
December 27, 2009

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well done friend.... it is beautiful..
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ThePriestess
December 27, 2009

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Awwww my precious Gentle Soul, I have just read this beautiful piece of writing to Haylie and she smiled.
Thank you so much for such a beautiful poem.
I love you very much and I am so very proud of you.
Take care my Gentle Soul,
Timmie
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dazedforever
December 27, 2009

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:)
'she writes like a mermaid'....beautifully said Thunder, and i couldn't agree more,
Haylie's talent is endless, just like her mom's, very nice work, how much more sweeter can you get ? LOL
keep writing my friend!!
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