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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥


Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: May 26, 2005 at 08:38 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Sad | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.8 Stars by 5 users with 5 comments and 385 views

The Mourning Stops  

The Mourning Stops



Phantoms in a painted room
Holding onto the past poignantly
Something like the present exists
And lasts there forever to remind me

Pull the shade down now
And mourn for those long passed
Throw open the windows anyhow
And let some air in here fast

Iím not into mourning the dead
People, places, or relationships.
Itís never long ago enough that I was fed
The smells of death on her purple lips.

The morticians do a great job
If youíre into the look of mannequins,
No more blood pumps thru those veins
The dust and decay still shows on the skin.




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Comments & Reviews



Katela
May 31, 2005
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very good, very descriptive, with the big words, it flowed nicely, good job Ivie!


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TempestOfNature
May 31, 2005
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excellent poem Ive its true mourning won't do any good until you reach death..thanks sharing


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MaryJane
May 29, 2005
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I like this one. Very good.


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BobQuinn
May 26, 2005
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Just returned from Getteysburg, the most haunted place in the world it's said, guess what.. it's true!
BBBRRRRRRRR what a scarey night we had! Your poem just made the hair on my neck stand back up!!
How do you get such timing Ividoe?


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drowning_in_you
May 26, 2005
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Bravo! Again you break away from the norm and into the darkness.As a "dark" poet I cannot say that I could have written a better piece if dark is what you wish to call this.


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