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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥


Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: May 26, 2005 at 08:33 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Romance | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.42 Stars by 7 users with 7 comments and 423 views

Evening Conspires  

Evening Conspires

This wall of distance
That separates us,
Is like a rock
And a hard place.
Even tho we share the same
Sky on earthís space
And we revolve
Around the same sun,
And your voice
Is second to none.
After speaking with you
Over telephony wires
Iím always torn between,
A muse that totally inspires,
And feeling so very lonesome.
Especially when evening conspires
To pronounce just me being one


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Comments & Reviews



BobQuinn
May 31, 2005
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Do you mean"feeling" so very lonesome? That would make more sense, and this piece reminds me of being married. brrrrrr!!


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BobQuinn
May 31, 2005
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Do you mean"feeling" so very lonesome? That would make more sense, and this piece reminds me of being married. brrrrrr!!


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Katela
May 31, 2005
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Another excellent write, the rhyme and words were perfect, great job


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MaryJane
May 29, 2005
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OH I very much like this 1!! Very well written!!


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Stargazer
May 29, 2005
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Yes...I can relate. So close, and yet so far. I want to be stronger. I need connection...but don't like waiting....and when the connection comes..I fear losing it...we are so alike in many ways...


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TempestOfNature
May 27, 2005
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beautifull wriiten i always feel this way sometimes well every time..thnaks for sharing


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drowning_in_you
May 26, 2005
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Not a single fault...true poetic beauty


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