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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥


Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: May 26, 2005 at 08:30 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Non Fiction | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.4 Stars by 5 users with 5 comments and 416 views

Call Me The Same  

~Call Me the Same~

Are you a pretty one or an ugly son?
Or just a pretty ugly son of a gun?
Are you all together or crazy as a loon,
And in sane enough to howl at the moon?
Are you a smart one or just a smart ass?
Better than a dumb ass holding class.
Are you just plain stupid
Catatonic and then all at once lucid?
Youíre whatever you want to be.
Just like me
Just like me
Full of love and joy
That sometimes causes pain hate and rage
We may not be so unusual from one another
Mother, father, sister, brother.
Stumbling over and over again,
The same page on the same stage
My fiercesome for and friend.
The Ace of Spades to the left,
Carving blades to the right;
Her we are being stuck in the our middle
With you plating fiddle.
Being honest with all our might.
Waiting here tapping our toes
Drunk on loving the fight,
ĎCos this is the way life goes.
Calling all weirdoes
To call me the same,
Iíve been here long enough
To know my name.

And itís one two three
Never mind little olí me,
Four five six
Walk softly and carry big sticks,
Seven eight nine
This one gets us every time;
But whatís mine is yours,
And whats yours is mine.


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BobQuinn
May 31, 2005
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I seem to be just a story teller and not a poet, because I really don't understand what this kind of writing is about, not just yours, all the "real"poems I read leave me scratching my head. I am beginning to understand where my stuff belongs, or doesn't, because in all the competetions I've entered, havent so much as gotten an honorable mention. I,m doing short stories almost exclusively now and have several on my site.


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Katela
May 31, 2005
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This one is very true, I like the style, good job, its full of small gems of advice


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TempestOfNature
May 31, 2005
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another excellent poem my guesses we are all the same....in many ways thanks for sharing


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MaryJane
May 29, 2005
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Very well written, well expressed poem. Great job!


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drowning_in_you
May 26, 2005
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thisis quite different


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