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A Series by ThunderStorm

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: December 12, 2009 at 04:39 pm
Upload Type: Series, A (18+)  
Category: Mystery & Crime | Non Fiction | Detective
Upload Stats: 4.3 Stars by 5 users with 5 comments and 379 views

Gangster pet  

In early Chicago Illinois there is a gangster goes under mafia James he has a pet named Jessie dog.

But then mafia James was taking into the prison James was running away From the Swat cops.

Ha you can catch me you Fuckers so James told Jessie dog let me see your puppy doll he stash $40,000 dollars inside the puppy doll.

So the both of the Gangsters got a hot-air balloon soon the Military shot down their Balloon.

James and Jessie went to the big time prison so they stayed in prison James was determined to get out.

Damn it damn all you fuckers go to hell burn in hell I tell you so day by day but then James brother.

Came by and see how his baby brother is doing so Louie Unlocked the cell so the 3 gangsters went off to Tokyo Japan where their family is waiting for them.

So they got on an airplane to Tokyo will be daytime at 4:22 in the morning so they rushed to a hotel.

With the $40,000 dollars with them so the Japanese police know about the Gangsters Escape from Chicago prison.

Damn I wish our Mafia Family was here right now but then there was a knock at the door.

Soon enough it was James and Louie’s family came in come on in from the Fucking cold.

Louie’s mom Harriet said Louie how many times I have to tell you stop cussing in front of your baby sister.

So they had a good time into the nighttime hours till then they got caught from the Japanese police.

The End

Thanks to Dmph84 and Cliff for the great Challenge

© ThunderStorm - all rights reserved

Author Notes

To Dmph84 and Cliff's great challenge

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Comments & Reviews ( X 3)

December 13, 2009
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interesting story thunder.. very cool pet lol. i loved it, see u took part in the challenge.
great images, u have some imagination

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December 12, 2009
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Gangster Pet it is
Nice story. I have enjoyed the read. I myself is like chasing this gangsters while reading. I can feel the story. I only feel the write is too short for a story but still is a good write.
Keep on writing,

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December 12, 2009
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Lets see, It was good, full of suspense and vivid images, But it ended to quick, and didn't have much in a plot. but i think that with a little more work it would be a great piece to read

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December 12, 2009
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It might need some work for the plot, because how do you typically get out of jail and go to an airport without getting caught? Otherwise, interesting.

oh and interesting title too lol

 wordsmagic100 replied on December 12, 2009

sorry but one more thing... what happened to jesse?

 wordsmagic100 replied on December 12, 2009

December 12, 2009
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LOL this was excellent and a very fun read. great work thunder i really enjoyed this. thanks for taking up the challenge and coming up with this story lol Gangster pet, great. Kind regards Dan

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