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A Short Story by ThunderStorm

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: December 11, 2009 at 06:04 pm
Upload Type: Short Story, G (All)  
Category: Fantasy | Fantasy | Fantasy
Upload Stats: 4.83 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments and 316 views

My graduation story  

As I get ready for my graduation in 2007 my classmates in my school was ready.

As the intense was building up at the football field one by one the principal was calling their names.

So it was my turn to be the star everyone was shouting firewolf firewolf so I wrote a poem for the class of 2007.

The poem was called forever alive here goes with my last breath I will breathe your name You're my hero even in death In a need of an angel you came in the dark skies of the midnight
You taught me to believe I saw within you the light Because of you I breathe I could never repay you You've given me something to live for my Admiration is something I wish you knew I couldn't ask for more With you I know I'm never alone I now know what Iím meant to do I feel you deep beneath the bone I will never forget you I'm meant to keep you alive and known You shall forever be Kept strong deep inside me

Everyone was clapping and even in tears when they hear that heartful poem.

Even my principal was in tears even my best teachers was in tears too with that the class of 2007 graduation.

Was a great success before I close out I am not a Coward or a Quitter because my grandpa is inside of my heart.

Take care grandpa I wish was still alive so you can watch me graduate from 12th grade.

My Graduation story before last day of my 12th grade year in high school

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Comments & Reviews

January 02, 2010
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I actually really liked this; great work. It was very creative, and it seemed kind of like a self reaffirmation. Great work, I think about my graduation, just a boat in my life, that passed by. Wish it could of been like this one though! Great work.

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December 11, 2009
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yes thunderwolf such a heartwarming piece you've created here. I'm indeed touch by it...
a well written one thank you for sharing...

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December 11, 2009
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i am happy you had such a perfect graduation...with your grandpa spiritually by your side!

Read ya later!!!!!!!!!

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