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on every summer we celebrate a time where our forefathers which we called the delcration of indpendce which we called fireworks day it's happend every once a year which is so cool i love it so much where we shoot firecrackers or black snakes or bottle rockets or m-180s is okay i love to blow stuff up even it shoots in the into nighttime sky where the sky is so cool and beyond and way beyond good luck
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I like the imagery that you have instilled in my mind with this piece my friend. Very well done indeed. I can hear the crowds gasping in delight as another firework flies off into the dark sky.. You have caught the atmosphere well. Keep writing.