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A Poem by ThunderStorm

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: November 27, 2009 at 03:02 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Fantasy | Fantasy | Fantasy
Upload Stats: 3.75 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 303 views


on every summer we celebrate a time where our forefathers which we called the delcration of indpendce which we called fireworks day it's happend every once a year which is so cool i love it so much where we shoot firecrackers or black snakes or bottle rockets or m-180s is okay i love to blow stuff up even it shoots in the into nighttime sky where the sky is so cool and beyond and way beyond good luck

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December 06, 2009
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Great Imagery
I like the imagery that you have instilled in my mind with this piece my friend. Very well done indeed. I can hear the crowds gasping in delight as another firework flies off into the dark sky.. You have caught the atmosphere well. Keep writing.

Yours in Darkness
Wayne Leon

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November 27, 2009
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That was good, but I can't really see how it's a poem. I must be blind

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