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A Poem by ThunderStorm

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: November 27, 2009 at 02:47 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Fantasy | Romance | Fantasy
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 3 users with 4 comments and 299 views

Thunder and jaded best friends  

On the kingdom of writers there are 2 mighty fine looking writers one is thunderstorm a brilliant 21 year old and there is jaded rose a terrific 30 year old jaded debut on the kingdom of writers I canít remember right off but jaded and thunder become the best friends jaded wants to follow thunder to achieve his goal before the dawn of the new year she is so sweet and her writing is like pretty pink Roses on the mountain top my writing came from my heart and my soul together these 2 of friends will be the best writers that god never seen in his lifetime these 2 might become a deck of playing cards Thunder is the king and jaded will be the Queen Dark elegy will be a Jack gabstboz will be a ace Tarantula 81 is a beauty princess together these 5 friends are closer to each other even they have so much respected for each other writings because they called themselves the Alliance of truth and honesty we are the best loyal and true all of you has true courage friendship hope love and light after all we look out for each other sometimes once a poet is stuck on a poem title it is the Alliance of truth and honesty we salute the poets and our fighting men and women for fighting for country please come home A lot of families are worry about our freedom

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Author Notes

To jaded and thunder

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Comments & Reviews ( X 3)

March 28, 2010
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This is absolutely Beast... by the way hope no offense to the spider meets thunder analogy... but anyways this is so raw.

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November 27, 2009
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Heya this is Amazing... !!
Keep up the good work. (Y)
There is some really fantastic useage of words in hear
x x x

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November 27, 2009
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thank you thunder. i am honored to be your friend. keep up the writing .....i wanna see you get to your goal and i'll be here every step of the way.

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November 27, 2009
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yeah nice ending my buddy thun! the alliance lives!

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