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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥


Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: May 20, 2005 at 01:50 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Personal | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.33 Stars by 6 users with 6 comments and 365 views

Frozen by the Heat  

~Frozen by the Heat~

Iím having a struggle of a time
Sitting here doing nothing at all.
I wish I could dance or something
I wish I could involve you all.

There are times to think about things,
And the stuff youíve already done,
And there are times to involve everyone.
Even if youíre the only one who comes.

Iíve got a lot of stuff on my mind
Some things I push way back to the front
Others I just do by rote motion
While the rest just keeps me stumped

Will I ever get this thing worked out?
Will it ever really be sweet?
Or will I just have a struggle of a time?
Standing here frozen by the heatÖ


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Comments & Reviews ( X 1)



BobQuinn
May 31, 2005
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HA ! Boy howdy can I relate to this, you speak to...and of the human condition. Nicely put.


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Katela
May 31, 2005
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I agree, sometimes my mind gets all mixed up, good job


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MaryJane
May 29, 2005
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Very good, I enjoyed it.


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Stargazer
May 29, 2005
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I can see it. I can feel the thought processes. What to do ? Are you doing enough ? Should you be second guessing ? Why should you NOT second guess ?? I will go read some more....fun !


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Katela
May 23, 2005
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A very good poem Ivie! another great write


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TempestOfNature
May 22, 2005
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hi ivie excellent job on the poem such a pleasure to read your work keep writing


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