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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥


Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: May 20, 2005 at 01:39 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Personal | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.66 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments and 797 views

No More Tribulations  

No More Tribulations


How long should we just stand here?
Knowing what should really be done.
Can we just sit and watch the sky fall,
As is the custom of some?

Can we come to some sort of conclusion,
That supports the events at hand?
Thereís certainties abounding here,
And afraid you just donít understand.

If I tried to explain them all
Iíd just be repeating myself again.
What if youíd just listened the first or tenth time?
Youíre supposed to be my greatest friend.

Iím not going to be hung on that cross,
Not this time or even ever after this.
You know everything about my heart soul and mind
So why canít we do what you promised and live in bliss?

Our circumstances are different from others
This has always been a proven state.
So I wonít believe Iím caught anymore
I just wonít take that bait.

You set the rules from the beginning
And I told you of my stipulations
Now you must live in the bed youíve made
And I will suffer no more tribulations


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Comments & Reviews ( X 2)



MaryJane
May 29, 2005
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Wow this is an amazing poem! Great Job!!


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Katela
May 23, 2005
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Another good one, great job


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drowning_in_you
May 21, 2005
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you are one of the only writers on this site that truly cannot be labled.One day you come out with something that is rather "happy go lucky" and then the next is something serious or sometimes even sad then switch it up again and write somethign hott....you are such an amazing poet


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