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A Poem by Leopassion7

Author: Leopassion7
Created: November 25, 2009 at 11:42 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Contemporary | Inspirational | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 210 views


I seek the path Iíve traveled
through the Mirror of Time,
finding a dirt road
defeated, sodden...laden with dread
And what Iíve discovered....
Racks me with mar
But the wet knives
Began to dry, as
Heavenís tears ceased their
Downpour upon my soul.
And suddenly anew,
Came the life of my musical
Alive and breathing:
I inhale deeply the pine scent.
I could feel the very strings
From my violin;
Itís voice loud and clear.
Awakening at will
My wheels drove fiercely
With wild abandon,
Caring not whither they go.
Looking back on history
Now, I remember
That long ago path of
Drought in the Garden of Shame.
The path which now beams
Of life and love.....
The path of my reflections

Shameka k. Wright

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December 18, 2009
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Flowing free verse poem about overcoming a bad time and coming out strong and lively. There are a lot of strong images and emotions is the poem. Nice word choices.

I see no errors.

Keep writing.


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November 25, 2009
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Great write
Keep up the work

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