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♥ Mind Wars ♥

Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: May 17, 2005 at 09:46 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Contemporary | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments 407 views
Mind Wars 
~Mind Wars~

I’ve fought in some wars,
And even won some;
But I’ve taken plenty of guff from
Atilla the Hun,
The Flying Nun,
Just to name one,
And even two
Just doesn’t seem to do.
In my mind it’s half past a billion,
So who’s to say at that rate,
It hasn’t been a zillion.
I’m just blessed to find,
That I can still feel and believe
Youthful in my mind.

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Comments & Reviews

Katela
May 23, 2005

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Cute poem, great write
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drowning_in_you
May 19, 2005

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A very simple write but i will say that you havnt lost a step as far as being the true master of word flow goes
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brokenhearted
May 18, 2005

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I like this! It's really cute! How are you Ivie??? I haven't heard from youin a long time. E-mail me sometime!
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