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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥


Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: May 17, 2005 at 09:46 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Contemporary | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments and 441 views

Mind Wars  

~Mind Wars~

Iíve fought in some wars,
And even won some;
But Iíve taken plenty of guff from
Atilla the Hun,
The Flying Nun,
Just to name one,
And even two
Just doesnít seem to do.
In my mind itís half past a billion,
So whoís to say at that rate,
It hasnít been a zillion.
Iím just blessed to find,
That I can still feel and believe
Youthful in my mind.



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Comments & Reviews



Katela
May 23, 2005
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Cute poem, great write


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drowning_in_you
May 19, 2005
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A very simple write but i will say that you havnt lost a step as far as being the true master of word flow goes


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brokenhearted
May 18, 2005
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I like this! It's really cute! How are you Ivie??? I haven't heard from youin a long time. E-mail me sometime!


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