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♥ Its Just Sand ♥

Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: May 17, 2005 at 09:35 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Non Fiction | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 5 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments 491 views
Its Just Sand 
~It’s Just Sand~


To sit around
And pound sand
Into the ground
May be dutiful and sound
To some,
Though to this one;
Two birds in the bush
May not be less
Than one in the hand
For I take a good look,
And oh my, it’s just sand.

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TempestOfNature
May 31, 2005

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life is like sand we better make good use of it or else were dead thanks for sharing ive lovin ur work...
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brokenhearted
May 18, 2005

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I like this!!! It's cute!!!
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