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A Series by ThunderStorm

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: November 15, 2009 at 03:11 pm
Upload Type: Series, T (13+)  
Category: Humor | Horror | Dark
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 4 users with 4 comments and 255 views

Lament for the fallen story part 2  

Lament want to stay here with lauren but the general wanted lament come home now but lauren said he is not going anywhetre said lauren it is i the reaper for lament the general look inside lauren's eyes he said oh Sh*t there she is lament screamed in a mighty roar she was looked on see lament crushed the general's ship like a can of tuna she was so thrilled to see lament allright the general said it is not damn over yet so lament asked lauren if i can use her cell phone lauren agrees so lament call the high-surpeme leader professer Dark_elegy know as lament's dad and leader and ruler so lament went home to his dad and lauren she came too lament told lauren he wants her as his bride so lament's dad agreed so together the 3 of them put the general into a dent up banged up jail cell so the general will rot till the day is melting into a thick pile of playing cards so lament asked his dad if mom was still alive and his dad yes lament was in shock lament's dad said he had the techonlogy to bulid her back so meet your mom my son her name was tarantulla81 he was so crying to see his mom back then lament's uncle thunderstorm came i hope not interferne lament's dad nope not at all brother come on in this is a reunion for all of us let the party begin in full swing there was demon beer and demon sandwiches lament was so thrilled and pleased so lauren was outside looking around this is so lovely she was wearing a demon necklace so her and lament will be in touch for each other so that's the end of lament for the fallen thank you

Last Modified: November 24, 2009 at 07:29 pm
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November 16, 2009
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That's wild
"melting into a thick pile of playing cards" I love the creativity. Great job Thunder. I enjoyed reading your story.


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November 15, 2009
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lol i liked it alot unique and the star studd class made it so much better

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November 15, 2009
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cool and funny!
while reading this I'm laughing and laughing! my friend you've created such story with an all stars characters! what a' surprising second part! such cool ideas you include me and tarantulla81 and your self...oh my thunder my friend cant stop laughing up to now! a' very cool and funny story that you brings into life! lol!

your friend dark...elegy

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November 15, 2009
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cool story u guys. interesting... shame i read second part first though

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