Thank you for this letter. Congratulations on writing for ten years, Bravo( clap, clap, clap...) I wish you all the power and creativity to keep writing, and enjoy each word, and thought. I'm proud to have you as a friend.
Okay that was good but im not quite sure what the point of it was... and not to be rude but your teachers arnt writing reviews (or maybe they are??) reach out to the reader and let us feel something in the piece, dont brag. not meaning to be mean just pointing it out.