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A Poem by ThunderStorm


Author: ThunderStorm
Created: November 07, 2009 at 06:23 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Romance | Romance | Love
Upload Stats: 4.85 Stars by 7 users with 8 comments and 221 views

My memory  

As my memories to rest for the night sometimes my aching pen is awaiting for a refill

Oh My lover i could not bare to see you leave with out a simple kiss

My promise is been dark and painful death

My keepsake is been burn into a fireplace

My Coach is shouting a storm

My Momma is crying for her own daughter graduating

Watching your daughter and her boyfriend getting married

Having your first granddaughter saying her first words

to my grandma i could never mislead you to justice

to my grandpa I wish you was still alive and well

to my sister wishful thinking for you



Last Modified: November 24, 2009 at 07:32 pm
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Comments & Reviews ( X 7)



Eilidh333
December 28, 2009
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Wow
You really capture a beautiful message of love in all of it's forms. Our love for our family, our friends and our lover. Powerful memories of important moments in life, those which will stay with us for ever and which shape the very person that we are. Very personal and well written, I love it.


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Darkmoon
November 27, 2009
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Sweet
Sweet memories we all have huh? This is a poem of love and affection, a really good structured poem, keep up the good work!


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dazedforever
November 15, 2009
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wow
i really like this,
its so personal and well expressed,
and very well written too,
you are a lovely and cute poet friend!
God Blesss !!!


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blossomwriter
November 12, 2009
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Pure heart and soul!
You surely capture the grattitude of life's eccense! ery well ritten!


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LILIANGOUWS
November 12, 2009
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Very charming poem. You still need to find your groove here and there, but you have good potential to become a great poet. Shout if I can give you some tips

Lilian


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BrokenGloves
November 10, 2009
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I like this
You did a superb job with this poem. I like poems that have a close personal meaning towards their authors. Keep me posted on other poems you write in the future.


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plato
November 08, 2009
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Awesome!
Wow Thunder, very impressive poem. Like time is fading and renewing , very clever and emotional. memories are like a room we can go into, and see a slide show. You presented that very well, along with making new memories! Love it, Plato


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BloodDippedRose
November 07, 2009
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yay
wow, this is really awesome!!
I totallyy love ittt
I mean... I cant imagine reading anythingb better than this,
totally perfect in every way possible

you should publish it
send it to time or something
thats so totally cool

OMGOMG
I'm obsessing about it lol
well it's obsession worthy

really
it is it is ^.^

I LOVVE ITTT


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