Profile Home My Writing About Me Latest News My Blog
My Guestbook Message Me Members Area Writers-Network
♥ Without Us, Without Them ♥

Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: May 14, 2005 at 08:46 am
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Love | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4 Stars by 1 users with 2 comments 290 views
Without Us, Without Them 
Lets go away and hide
And let the world simply abide
Without us

Lets go on a huge holiday
Take it smooth and all the way
Without them

Indigo eyes and brown skin
I feel my place is with you
I look at your face and it begins again
I love the way you look at me look at you
It shows the way you feel about me
For me, and through me within
Without them we can fake it till we make it
Break it wide open baby
Singing songs and singing along
Never about maybe
And forever having a heart for one another
My big strong lovely brother

Can we make it this way
Holding the world constantly at bay
Without us, without them

 
  You have already reviewed this writing piece. If you would like to add another comment, please click on the "Additional Comments" link below your review to display the comment box.  
 

Comments & Reviews
May 15, 2005
brave!
 Additional Comments (0)

There are no comments on this review.


BobQuinn
May 14, 2005

Helpful: Thumbs Up Thumbs Down
Compassionate and accepting just came to mind, a lady with a big heart and good sense wrote this. I was reminded of the NT scripture where Jesus says; "Ye must become as little children" they have no hate or prejudice, it's taught to them. You have regressed back to before your soul was stained with those flaws and it makes for some refreshing writing iviedo, keep it up.
 Additional Comments (0)

There are no comments on this review.





Writers-Network.com was granted non-exclusive rights to display this work
All poetry, stories, columns, and other member contributions are owned solely by the poster
©  Writers-Network.com  - All Rights Reserved