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A Series by ThunderStorm

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: November 04, 2009 at 07:10 pm
Upload Type: Series, G (All)  
Category: Romance | Romance | Sad
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments and 214 views

Part 4 The new Queen of spider village  

As Lori was looking around in her brand-new princess bedroom there was a letter. it said dear daughter I enclosed this letter I want to let you know I am leaving spider village so in a couple of months . I will be leaving Lori was crying in tears Mars came in Loriís bedroom whatís wrong he asked Lori said the Queen is leaving spider village. Mars was staggered when he heard everything the letter said so when the Queen Venus was about to pack her web she had a one more announcement to make. I will give my crown to my daughter Lori she is now the Queen to spider village Lori was in shocked when she is now the Queen of spider village even she was in tears Lori said I will miss you mom she got on her knees and begging not to leave Venus said I have to I have been the Queen for 67 years and now it is time for you my daughter Lori to take over for the next 67 years Lori was crying so hard she wished her real mom was here so Lori went back to England so Loriís mom was crying in tears she was so relived to see her daughter again she asked her mom if she can nickname her mom her mom said yes tarantulla 81 was herís mom nickname from this day forward so this is the end of Spider in love from yours friends at writers-network thunderstorm and tarantulla 81

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Author Notes

to tarantulla 81 the story is done

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November 05, 2009
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hi thunder
that was one sweet story you put together, a nice ending her becoming the queen and all. i liked it.

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