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A Poem by ThunderStorm

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: November 04, 2009 at 06:03 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Romance | Romance | Love
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments and 216 views

Part 3 the future of lori's life  

As the Queen Venus was waiting see what lies to have a daughter like Lori she paused for a brief moment then she think again so she had a announcement to make she said till this day. I the Queen Venus the Queen of spider village from this day forward. I finally found my princess her name is princess Lori was in shock. Lori written a lovely poem for her new mom you are the talented spider I could ever met my debt is paid for but my willing is painful one. But the long road is in good hands. I love you mom the Queen was in tears when she heard that lovely poem. The Queen Welcome Lori to her brand new princess bedroom she was amazed when she saw it the Queen was asking Lori do you like it and Lori said yes it is the beauty I ever seen in my lifetime Lori had 100 books all about spiders and slimy reptiles and 90 books about how to become a princess she was so thrilled. Just wait till the last chapter of my story Take care poets and writers

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Part 3 of my story

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November 04, 2009
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aaaw she will be a princess... how cute. u know still love that name Lori...princess Lori has a nice ring to it.
you have a very gentle and sweet way of writing. i am enjoying the series here

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