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A Series by ThunderStorm

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: November 01, 2009 at 03:56 pm
Upload Type: Series, G (All)  
Category: Romance | Romance | Love
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 1 users with 2 comments and 248 views

Chapter 2 The greatest gift  

Well Lori got a very good night’s sleep so mars went to check on Lori so mars and Lori had breakfast together Mars had a slice of Fly pie and Lori had eggs bacon sausage hash browns biscuits and gravy so after they finished breakfast. They walked around spider village it is a Quiet little town. They stop by the legendary war statue where did they saw the greatest spider ever live his name was spider warrior. the greatest warrior ever live on the face of spider village so mars took Lori to meet the Queen Venus the ruler of all spiders so they went on to see the Queen so they march in the kingdom where the Queen is waiting for them the spider solider just stopped mars . Halt what is your ranking Lt. Major Sir he said oh come on in Lt. Major mars the Queen is been expecting you Mars said Hello Queen Venus the Queen said who is this lonely little fly mars said this is Lori From untied Kingdom England the Queen said come on child I won’t hurt you Lori was asking the Queen a Question She whispered it to the Queen’s ear I was wondering you can be my mom the Queen has to think about this long and hard Stay tuned for part 3 of my story Thank you

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Author Notes

Part 2 of my story

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November 07, 2009
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November 01, 2009
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hmm does sound interesting. why does she want that?
nice progress

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