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A Poem by ThunderStorm

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: November 01, 2009 at 11:52 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Romance | Romance | Love
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 2 users with 4 comments and 319 views

chapter 1 the beginning  

In a beautiful country cottage there is a beautiful girl named Lori she is only 12 years old she lives with her mom her mom name is Audrey her mom is a banker in jolly old England. But then the unthinkable happening they was flat broke so which means Lori has to find a place to called home but then she found a hidden door so Lori open the door hopefully it will lead somewhere but then a time warp gulped Lori. Into the kingdom of spiders she asked where Am I at then a spider approached her the spider said donít be afraid I wonít hurt you beside my name is mars. Lori looked up you are from mars wow now I am really Dreaming so mars took Lori to the kingdom of spiders so mars took Lori To a cozy web so she can sleep for the night mars said you will be safe here for now so mars went back to the kingdom of spiders so the Queen of all the spiders the Queen name was Venus.

Part 2 soon

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Author Notes

Please P-m me if you want part 2

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February 27, 2010
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very creative dude...really nice

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December 30, 2009
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no arachnophobia
beautiul..all applaud to spider man and spider woman

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November 07, 2009
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! SPIDERS????????? you freaked me out Thunderstorm!!! but i like it!!
Queen of the zombies

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November 01, 2009
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lol love the name lori... really love that name.... be honest i am afraid of spiders to death lol but this is a good story thunder. i like where it is going. enjoyable read. lovely

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