November 01, 2009 at 11:52 am
Poem, G (All)
Romance | Romance | Love
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chapter 1 the beginning
In a beautiful country cottage there is a beautiful girl named Lori she is only 12 years old she lives with her mom her mom name is Audrey her mom is a banker in jolly old England. But then the unthinkable happening they was flat broke so which means Lori has to find a place to called home but then she found a hidden door so Lori open the door hopefully it will lead somewhere but then a time warp gulped Lori. Into the kingdom of spiders she asked where Am I at then a spider approached her the spider said donít be afraid I wonít hurt you beside my name is mars. Lori looked up you are from mars wow now I am really Dreaming so mars took Lori to the kingdom of spiders so mars took Lori To a cozy web so she can sleep for the night mars said you will be safe here for now so mars went back to the kingdom of spiders so the Queen of all the spiders the Queen name was Venus.
Part 2 soon
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