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A Poem by ThunderStorm


Author: ThunderStorm
Created: October 10, 2009 at 10:37 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Romance | Romance | Love
Upload Stats: 4.66 Stars by 6 users with 7 comments and 245 views

Barbed wire with love  

As the barbed wire pierce my skin I have been thinking is this for pain or something else. Have to race my soul
the skies are a mystery around me as my long lost memories rest in the cold depths in my heart. the barbed wire is pierceing through my smooth looking skin As i gasped with every last breath I got in my body but then I forgot I am in love The family in my dreams. the family at writers-network they are there to guide me. like miss anna. miss stara miss joan miss amanda miss nikki miss jasmine miss pirya miss danielle miss timmie my sweet heart painfuladdcit and miss vampire freak19 and miss dreamer and miss trantulla81 and mister Gabstboz and mister Dom1n1ck and miss lastverse. you all always there to see me in the shadows. take care


Last Modified: November 24, 2009 at 07:41 pm
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Author Notes


To my friends


 
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Comments & Reviews



ComaWhite
January 13, 2010
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you're a great writer! and a great friend too!!!!!!!!!!


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eemotion
November 04, 2009
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interesting
most people wouldnt associate barbed wire with love. i like the way u think man


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Desmond
October 12, 2009
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A well written tribute to your friends on W-Network.
Good work.


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tarantulla81
October 11, 2009
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that was very sweet Thunder
As the barbed wire pierce my skin I have been thinking is this for pain ..very nicely said, really poetic.
very deeply expressed and well executed also liked the turn of the piece.


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skyeblu2009
October 10, 2009
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loved it
it seems like you just wrote what was in your heart and dint look back and i like that
i like stuff from the soul its a wonderful thing to see


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SquishingBananas
October 10, 2009
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A wonderful shout out to your writers-network family. I'm sure they are there to look out for you, it's wonderful to be able to have an internet family of sorts.


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MistressWordPlay
October 10, 2009
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excellent
Lovely write about your friends and fellow writers.
Really enjoyed it.
Susan


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