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Barbed wire with love
As the barbed wire pierce my skin I have been thinking is this for pain or something else. Have to race my soul
the skies are a mystery around me as my long lost memories rest in the cold depths in my heart. the barbed wire is pierceing through my smooth looking skin As i gasped with every last breath I got in my body but then I forgot I am in love The family in my dreams. the family at writers-network they are there to guide me. like miss anna. miss stara miss joan miss amanda miss nikki miss jasmine miss pirya miss danielle miss timmie my sweet heart painfuladdcit and miss vampire freak19 and miss dreamer and miss trantulla81 and mister Gabstboz and mister Dom1n1ck and miss lastverse. you all always there to see me in the shadows. take care
Last Modified: November 24, 2009 at 07:41 pm
To my friends
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that was very sweet Thunder
As the barbed wire pierce my skin I have been thinking is this for pain ..very nicely said, really poetic.
very deeply expressed and well executed also liked the turn of the piece.