Oh yes I've heard of that type of story before .. it really does suck to always be betrayed and let down but those you trusted. I like how you kept this really short, very powerful and straightforward I like that alot. I really enjoyed this one alot only thing I would change is perhaps adding a few different words/changing a few words in the last paragraph. Something that could make it alittle more severe so to speak maybe add a line or two, other than that, loved it! Great job!
that peoem made me so sad for the girl...whose so beautiful and yet so sad
This girl has been let down too many times before.
The last part is the best part- "left"
the ending is as sudden as the people who leave her