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A Poem by ThunderStorm

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: September 24, 2009 at 10:11 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Romance | Love | Gothic
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments and 388 views

Painfuladdcit and thunder story  

well it was a freezeing morning in maine where a loney girl named amanda whitney where she was about to put her books up till her science book fell out of her freezeing hands till then a sweet and smart student he said here you go miss. she said thankyou she said wait what is your name he told her my name is jonathan andrew buckner a.k.a. thunderstorm she said cute name. so she went to her 3rd hour which is biology but then she gasped to her heart.... miss riddle the biology teacher told everyone will you please introduce yourselves to the new student till then amanda saw him earlier miss riddle asked the new student please take your seat she said hey hot stuff hey she was passing a love letter to him the lesson was about to begin he read the love letter it said will you become my boyfriend soon he wrote back he said yes so those 2 was holding hands they love each other but till then they was watching the weather on tv there is a big freeze tonight so no school for next 9 days amanda and jonathan was so pleased hear that so the prncipal miss cyrus told everyone get home safe and sound so they load the buses up but not jonathan and amanda they took jonathan's 2009 F-350 home so they puting on warm on the ac they turn down to draw lane street well both of them got out of the truck luckliy amanda had a key get into her house and that is the story how amanda and jonathan met

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Author Notes

to my sweetheart

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September 29, 2009
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Hi Thunderstorm
You wrote a great story. Sometimes the cold weather is good to bring two closer together .


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